Creative Writing Word Analisyis

KIT: I really liked the way she used the words "cool" and "electric. They both kind of have that shivers-down-your-spine sort of feel, and when paired together it's really strong. I also really like her use of the word "symphony" to describe the rain. It makes it feel conducted and beautiful, not as random as we generally see rain.

BRIANNA: I like how she described the dream as "not pretty". I think this is a more interesting way of saying that it was bad. The way she said she was amused by the "creations" was great description. I think it creates a positive mood, along with the words "beautiful" and "smiling"

AUSTIN: The word "orb" was really strong descriptively for me. I like the image it conveys. I also really like how he descriped the flash as a "cobra". This really makes it feel quik and sly. The word "lilaic" was also really helpful in conveying the beauty in the sky, by comparaing it to this colorful flower.

MINE: I am fond of the word "pulses" I like the way it sounds on your tounge. In my opinion it gives the feeling of the music flowing through you like a river of sound waves. I also like the way I used the word "vessels" describing my ears as an entry way to my mind. By dimishing the importance of the ears and calling them simply vessels, it makes the music sound more important. I also like my use of the word lure because it gives the thought that I am not moving of my own free will.